Kia ora! I am a year 6 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters.
This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi I'm Hunter from paroa school in Greymouth. I liked this post and thought it was awesome! 1 thing I think you should do next time is give this post a title, explain what this post is about and maby even make the DLO a bit bigger.
Well done Kauri for posting your recount on Petedelete's visit to our classroom. To be BTB (Better than before) try to make your recount easier to read, include a blurb explaining what the learning is about and work on your presentation. Keep up the good work, Ms Peters.
hi kauri its Kyrhan from ahipara school i like the post about pete delete mabey next time you could add a bit more on your info what we did with pete delete .But nice work
Hi I'm Hunter from paroa school in Greymouth. I liked this post and thought it was awesome! 1 thing I think you should do next time is give this post a title, explain what this post is about and maby even make the DLO a bit bigger.
ReplyDeleteWell done Kauri for posting your recount on Petedelete's visit to our classroom. To be BTB (Better than before) try to make your recount easier to read, include a blurb explaining what the learning is about and work on your presentation. Keep up the good work, Ms Peters.
ReplyDeletehi kauri its Kyrhan from ahipara school i like the post about pete delete mabey next time you could add a bit more on your info what we did with pete delete .But nice work
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